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First draft of Page 20 :

"Michael Wright (Batgirl editor) made me realize that  dividing the page into two vertical halves  was not the best way to carry the story across because there are those little panels with the Batarang action that sort of make the storytelling unclear.  So I just tried to make the page easier to read"